Goku not strong enough? Time dilation (4 yrs pass) he is now a super saiyan. The author is going to keep throwing new shiny weapons and abilities at every issue. The solution to the problem was lame at the end. The author essentially tells you 5 to 6 times that it’s not going to work out and then proceeds to walk you into it. However can he write the story in a way that doesn’t feel like we’re reading about 12yrs having pissing contests. I know the author wants us to see the protagonist as the end all be all. Your reading a story where every new plot twist the protagonist literally has to one up everyone else every time even his friends. Why? The obvious answer is the author wants to make him some kind of savior type figure, but really he is the annoying dude that has to do everything himself. The reason is simple the protagonist has to do everything. This book neutered the supporting friends of the protagonist. Unfortunately this causes issues with the pace and the development of the supporting characters. Like a lot of litrpg authors, this book tries to cram a lot of to-do lists together to raise the level of suspense.
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